Lesley is a writing coach who steps students through the process of crafting vibrant, revealing, and engaging application essays and personal statements. She is based in the San Francisco Bay Area, but provides essay help to applicants across the country and overseas.
For students starting from scratch, Lesley generally starts with a brainstorming questionnaire to get a sense of their personalities, passions, experiences, achievements, and goals—in advance of a video call. A promising topic area is then identified for a free-write (rough, non-intimidating, stream of consciousness writing) meant to uncover important clues about who a student really is and the stories s/he has to tell. The subsequent first draft is usually written with a clear theme in mind, the second is about shape and structure, the third about flow of language and transitions, and the last polishing and punctuation. This process is repeated in an abbreviated way for additional/supplemental essays.
After the initial call, drafts and recommendations are exchanged via e-mail, and questions resolved over the phone or through a video call.
Once a list of target colleges is drafted, Lesley can tailor a spreadsheet that allows for the grouping of similar essay prompts so the student can, wherever possible, adapt one essay for more than one purpose. She can also provide each student with a timeline to keep him on track and avoid any last minute emergencies.
For clients who have topics under control, and need no assistance with time and deadline management, Lesley is available simply to provide insightful and detailed recommendations on their drafts.
Our daughter is a pretty good writer, but I was worried her essays wouldn't "shine," and I DEFINITELY didn't want her to wait until the last minute and end up missing a school she really wanted. We looked around a lot, and settled on Lesley. Her whole process is... deep. Our daughter loved talking to her about her life experiences, and she ended up writing these essays that just blew us away. Lesley made it a point to tell me that she wanted our daughter to take responsibility for the process, kind of very nicely telling me to butt out unless something started going really wrong. I think that was part of what got our daughter so fired up to keep rewriting her essays until they were pretty much perfect. We were proud, and she got accepted to her top schools. :0)